Friday, 6 July 2018

Maui narrative writing: unsafe zombie invasion.

Maui is hiding in a shipwreck on the south island of New Zealand and is being invaded by zombies from the underworld!. He had to  Escape somehow And on the radio he heard that there Providing shelter food and warmth at the museum so he snuck out and ran and ran and ran. He caught a glimpse of blood and ripped clothes. He was terrified and fainted slipped into a river. As he was floating throw the river his clothes were even more ripped than before and his jeans were a dirtier yellow and heavy and his skin was more shine than before his hair was still in his ponytail he feels more manly adventures and brave he was angry he feels unsafe and afraid.  

6 comments:

  1. hi Maia
    i really liked your writing it was very interesting maybe work on your spelling but apart from that i loved it!
    your drawing was amazing! very detailed, i like the background too!

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  2. Thank you Eva I will work on my spelling.

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  3. I like your writiting it was amzing and so as your darwing!!! carry on

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  4. i like your daring and your righting but what is the Blake and wight thing

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  5. thank you so much

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