my poetry tools

W.A.L.T: to make a poster about everything that shout be in a poem.

reflection: I think that Eva Ella and Kaylee and I did really well together.

Mud monster mud run

Mud monster mud run

Running through the Crowd,

Shivering and shaking,

Taping up shoes,

Mad in your ears

Mud everywhere,

Slipping and sliding everywhere,

Slushy mad between your toes,

Mud Galore

Fun and fo.

City of the muddy Trench,

Splish splash,

Gowey gleanch.

Knee deep down

Finally out,

Down the mudslide

Into a splash,

As we finished We were wet and cold,

Eating hot food,

Tummy of gold.

W.A.L.T: to make an ordinary moment in time into an awesome poem

reflection: I think I did really well and I made an ordinary moment for me into an amazing poem.

THE GREATEST STORM

THE GREATEST STORM

I am going to use onomatopoeia a simile.

As the storm came over

The boats crashed in

On the seashore within

The stormy cloud Came over

As the boats piled over

Walk around to find that we're not in a place you've seen before

As you walked trees waved and the bushes rumbled

A lightning bolt STRUCK

The trees lit on fire

You jump back in a surprise

The rain washes it away

You feel relieved and frightened

You have no idea what to do but you seek shelter for the night

You jump into a boat and start to explore

You find steps on the lift nearshore

As you go up

You find an Office

And as you walk in The floor creaked beneath your feet

And find the Courage

To look to your right  

And see a cupboard

You open it and  

a skeleton falls out on you scream race out the door

and down the stairs

You race out the door of the boat so exhausted

You fall into the ocean and before you know it in the middle of nowhere.

How to make a quality comment

    W.A.L.T: How to make a quality comment
    I think I did really well with a little help from Eva.